Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2014
HEATHER'S FURY (5)
Taking One On For Heather
Int: Lakeland Police Department-Homicide Division-Next Day
Detective Marks to Detective Martin
"We've got a break in the Patrick case, patrol spotted gray Mustang over on Milton Avenue...matches the tags to the one Mister Patrick was driving."
Martin
"Well, that's great news, like to start the day with something positive, shouldn't be long till we hook up with Mister Patrick himself."
Marks
"That's the problem, we already did...found Mister Patrick deceased behind the steering wheel, looks to be major head trauma, like a head gash with a sharp object, Coroner's going over specifics now!"
Martin
Oh God, I don't like the way this is showing, too many unanswered questions...another hard case to finalize, just our luck..."
Marks
Yea, the dead never talk...just leave behind clues...assuming we can find them?"
Martin
Yea, like to questions we can only surmise...traditionally it will all take care of itself assuming someone comes forth, see anything like that happening?"
Marks
"For some reason, I'm thinking business associate or someone he worked around?"
Martin
"No, and we know the wife didn't do it...until the Coroner finds whatever he's going to find, we just sit...just sit this one out!"
Marks
"I'm all in with that!"
(Scene Switch)
Ext: Lakeland High School-Courtyard-12 noon
Heather and Marcia standing with gang of friends at outside lunch area.
Marcia
"You heard...they found you know who this morning, heard it on the radio?"
Heather
"Wow, that was quick, wonder what the next move's now?"
Marcia
"Doubt they're just going to close the case and walk away...probably focus on one of his Honey's...wonder if some lone bitty took things into her own hands?"
Troy passes showing a peace sign
"Hey, you still owe me $10 bucks for the yard, business is business?"
Marcia
"Don't forget the rim salt!"
Troy
"I get it, but I don't...sounds kinda kinked out...but I'm game?"
Marcia
"Oh, I'm sure you are...we'll see what pops up?"
Heather
"All right, that's enough..."I'll take care of your ten, but let's not hang out for a while, get me?"
Troy
"Totally understand...gotta go anyway...be good!"
Troy walking off.
Marcia
"Crap, gotta go to Fruit Loops class, and she's way over on the other side in the portables!"
Heather
"Still can't get why your taking French, nobody uses it?"
Marcia
"To know the difference between saying I'd like dressing on my salad
or you between my legs...us international types must be prepared...this concludes with a much needed venture to Paris this spring...can't wait!"
Heather
"Lucky you, you surprise me when I least expect it!"
Marcia
"Entre mes jambes...you be good girl!"
Heather
"Hey, what did you say?"
Heather looking down in her purse, realizes that she still had Marcia's cell phone.
Tries to catch up, going through the maze of students going back and forth.
Suddenly all the class room doors lock in portables as she arrives, since she didn't have any classes that period, she decides to take a short cut over behind the portables to the library across the football practice field.
Suddenly she hears muffled screams, dust rising up from between portables.
As she walks up she see's Marcia pinned down on the ground by several football players.
She recognizes Jamie forcing himself on her held down body.
Jamie's voice
"Hey girl, take this for Heather...you remember this now...of course you will!"
Jamie's voice
"Hey girl, take this for Heather...you remember this now...of course you will!"
A player turns, seeing Heather.
As Heather starts to react, player cold cocks her in the head, Heather blacks out!
(4 Hours Later)
Lakeland Hospital-Intensive Care-Shared Room
Marcia coming awake from unconsciousness.
Looking over to her right she see's Heather, head heavily bandaged up, with equipment hooked up to her. Feeling her own head which she finds also bandaged.
Doctor Bain walks into room with a clip board and a nurse.
Doctor Bain
"Well, hello my Dear, how are we doing, saw you moving about on the monitor...thought we'd see how your doing?"
Marcia
"Well, I hurt every place above my feet...does that sound right...what the hell happened?"
Doctor Bain
"We're not completely sure, but it looks like your Libia was torn, you experienced a major brain concussion, some scratches!"
Marcia
"What do you mean torn?"
Doctor Bain
"Looks like you were forceably raped, and during the process you appear to have been punched in the head several times...your a lucky girl, could have killed you!"
Marcia
"What about Heather, what happened to her?"
Doctor Bain
"Major concussion, fractured skull...might be a while till she comes around...severe bleeding of the brain..."
Marcia
"Who did this...I don't remember anything?"
Doctor Bain
"Well, that's perfectly normal in a situation like this...but don't worry, your thoughts will slowly come back to you, this all takes time!"
(3 Hours Later)
Heather finally starts moving around and coming to.
Trying to scratch banded head.
Heather
"Where did all these Hornets come from...get away, whoa...get out of here!"
Marcia
"What Hornets?"
Heather
"The one's flying around my head!"
"Probably, pieces of your brain coming loose, at least what's left of it...you got clobbered pretty good...how ya feeling?"
Heather
"I can't...can't remember what I'm suppose to feel like?"
Marcia
"Try to remember...your name is Heather...let's start with something simple!"
Heather looking at her arm bracelet
"Oh yea, now everything hurts, what in the world happened?"
Marcia
"I don't know, Doc said my hole is torn up, somebody got me good!"
Heather
"I remember a bunch of guys, you, and a lot of dust...but that's it?"
Marcia
"Doc said we should be getting back to remembering soon...so just be cool with it, okay?"
Heather
"Boy, ain't we some screwed up bitches...hey by the way, what was the Doctor's name?"
Marcia
"Funny thing...I can't seem to remember that...but he does have a name?"
Heather
"Names are good...super hard to get noticed without one!"
Marcia
"He's got one, but I don't have any idea...got to think man!"
Heather
"Wonder if my Mom knows where I'm at?
(Scene Switch)
(2 Weeks Later)
Marcia waiting on corner for Heather to pick her up for school.
Car load of boys pass by honking horn, she suddenly gets a flashback as she see's the football player's faces.
Heather pulls up
"Sorry I'm late...had my car keys, but I couldn't remember where I parked my car?"
Marcia
"Funniest thing, but part of the football team came by honking their horn, and like...everything just sort of snapped in...I think I was attacked by the football team...it was them!"
Heather
"Just like that, the whole football team?"
Marcia
"No, not the whole...members of it...so like Doctor Bain took some scrapings and I guess we'll see what happens with the DNA thing...I mean, it's a start!"
Heather
"Ou, scrapings?"
Marcia
"Well, semen samples, guess they dry up on the inside, so if they can get a good sample...we'll see!"
Heather
"Good luck with all of that...you need to be real sure before you start doing any finger pointing...could ruin somebody's life with that stuff!"
Heather pulling into school parking lot.
Girls get out of car walk over to group before home room.
Ted walks up to Heather
"How you feeling girl, glad to see you back in the game!"
Heather
"Yea, it's been a process, but with each day..."
Ted
"I know...step by step!"
Jamie walks up to Heather
"When do you think you can return to the squad?"
"Heather getting sudden flashback, blurts out
"Your him!"
Jamie
"Who's him?"
Heather
"That voice...I remember that voice from the attack!"
Jamie laughing
"Don't look at me, I dunno what your talking about?"
Ted questions
"Are you sure Heather, cause that's a pretty serious allegation?"
Heather
"Hey Jamie...remember this one...this one's for Heather, say that for me?"
Jamie
"I'm not saying crap, mind your own business...why's she even thinking that?"
Ted
"Cause it is our business, why would she just think that...like out of the blue?"
Jamie
"All that headbanging got her all messed up, nobody did anything...just leave me alone..."
Jamie walking off
Home room bell rings
Heather
"Marcia, what are you thinking...you just see that?"
Marcia looking down
"Probably the same things you are...you got to watch what you say...I've already been hurt enough...try to be cool understand?"
Heather
"Yea, but...okay I get it...see you later!"
(Scene Switch)
Lakeland Hospital-Doctor Bain's Office
Tom Hatfield (DNA Supervisor) to Doctor Bain on phone
"Yes Richard we got the preliminaries on the Cody girl, ah Marcia Cody...she suffered major tearing of the vaginal wall and damage to the cervix...ah I found two different semen samples, we're ready for comparison...are you ready to approach the D.A. with a summary?"
Doctor Bain
"Yea, my findings are already in the submission, we just wait like usual and see who she calls in...all the usual...thanks Tom, bye!"
(Scene Switch)
Lakeland Police Department-Homicide Division
Detective Pam Martin
"Why do I always get this feeling that I'm babysitting this department...I wasn't even two steps in and your already having me manage the place...okay, let's see the report for Bob Patrick...are we getting anywhere?"
Detective Marks
"Kind of disturbing, but nothing you can't handle...with all the foot traffic they found over at the Patrick house...looked like a frat party...took the boys forever to separate everything!"
Martin
"Well, we started off with matching tire prints, nothing surprised me there!"
Marks
"This all looks so precalculated, but why was everything so sloppy?"
Martin
"Probably because it wasn't, like somebody surprised somebody...do you have to wait for someone to burp?"
Marks
"I'll figure this out...it's still too early...need another cup of coffee!"
(Scene Switch)
Int: Aunt Kate's Apartment
Heather finally get's back and Aunt Kate is trying to sort through things.
Heather
"Aunt Kate, why haven't the police done anything about this Jamie guy...I mean, he's the dude?"
Aunt Kate
"I don't have a clue, maybe they have some other things in the background, maybe you should give that detective girl a call, see what's up?"
Heather
"I can do that!"
Heather calling Detective Martin's private line.
Heather
"Hello, this is Heather Patrick, how are you Detective Martin?"
Martin
"Fine Miss Patrick, what can I help you with?"
Heather
"Well, I was kind of wondering about the case of the football players...like for any evidence, DNA, you know sperm samples and stuff...are you working on Marcia's situation, did you find anything?"
Martin
"Yes, of course...we have found things, but the report is not finalized and is not ready to be released...so we can't contend a case until everything has been brought forth!"
Heather
"So, this takes a lot of time, doesn't it?"
Martin
"Yes it does, but just be patient, we'll contact you when we're ready for additional testimony...okay Miss Patrick?"
Heather
"Okay, it's just that we were getting restless and we really wanted to know what was going on?"
Martin
"I understand Miss Patrick...anything else?"
Heather
"No, thank you...good bye!"
Hanging up phone.
Aunt Kate
"Any news?"
Heather
"Said they were still trying to put a case together...she said she'd contact me if they needed any more info...boy, this is taking longer than I thought!"
Aunt Kate
"Always does, just wanna be for sure before they start pointing fingers..."
(Scene Switch)
(Three Hours Later)
Int: Lakeland Police Department-Homicide Division
Agent Thomas (CSI Investigator) to Martin on phone
"Afternoon Miss Martin, this is Thomas!"
Detective Martin
"Afternoon, what have you got...I'm assuming this is about the Patrick case?"
Thomas
"Yes Mam, we concluded with four separate sets of tracks...coming into one window, looks like they were using it as a source of entrance, cause the only tracks we could find exiting were of a woman's size 9, looks like a style shoe...perhaps a Candies mule, but we're still checking...in any case the back sliding door was locked, but showed multiple traffic, so whoever came out the window went back to lock it up...hallway had blood splatter marks all over the place, which matched Mister Patrick's type, and we also located a broken open box of Rim Salt in the hallway, too!"
Martin
"Rim Salt...what is that?"
Thomas
"Just a finely ground salt use'd in bar tending...for making Margaritas and stuff!"
Martin
"Okay, well...what a mess we have here, anything else?"
Thomas
"Yea, there was a blood stained martini cart found over by the exiting fence, once again...consistent with Mister Patrick's blood type...kind of a mystery as to how he ended up behind the wheel of his car which of course was found crashed into his office that he no longer rented...it looks too much to have been planted...have to leave that up to you!"
Martin
"Yea, this is all looking so deliberate anyway...like each passing moment here...another shoe drops, you know?"
Thomas
"Oh yea, by the way...the source of entry...is was that girl's room they entered into...the Heather girl...had her pictures all over the wall, cheer leading gear...no mistake about that!
Martin
"There you go, just what I figured...thank you Mister Thomas...thank you very much!"
(Scene Close)
(4 Hours Later)
Lakeland Hospital-Intensive Care-Shared Room
Marcia coming awake from unconsciousness.
Looking over to her right she see's Heather, head heavily bandaged up, with equipment hooked up to her. Feeling her own head which she finds also bandaged.
Doctor Bain walks into room with a clip board and a nurse.
Doctor Bain
"Well, hello my Dear, how are we doing, saw you moving about on the monitor...thought we'd see how your doing?"
Marcia
"Well, I hurt every place above my feet...does that sound right...what the hell happened?"
Doctor Bain
"We're not completely sure, but it looks like your Libia was torn, you experienced a major brain concussion, some scratches!"
Marcia
"What do you mean torn?"
Doctor Bain
"Looks like you were forceably raped, and during the process you appear to have been punched in the head several times...your a lucky girl, could have killed you!"
Marcia
"What about Heather, what happened to her?"
Doctor Bain
"Major concussion, fractured skull...might be a while till she comes around...severe bleeding of the brain..."
Marcia
"Who did this...I don't remember anything?"
Doctor Bain
"Well, that's perfectly normal in a situation like this...but don't worry, your thoughts will slowly come back to you, this all takes time!"
(3 Hours Later)
Heather finally starts moving around and coming to.
Trying to scratch banded head.
Heather
"Where did all these Hornets come from...get away, whoa...get out of here!"
Marcia
"What Hornets?"
Heather
"The one's flying around my head!"
"Probably, pieces of your brain coming loose, at least what's left of it...you got clobbered pretty good...how ya feeling?"
Heather
"I can't...can't remember what I'm suppose to feel like?"
Marcia
"Try to remember...your name is Heather...let's start with something simple!"
Heather looking at her arm bracelet
"Oh yea, now everything hurts, what in the world happened?"
Marcia
"I don't know, Doc said my hole is torn up, somebody got me good!"
Heather
"I remember a bunch of guys, you, and a lot of dust...but that's it?"
Marcia
"Doc said we should be getting back to remembering soon...so just be cool with it, okay?"
Heather
"Boy, ain't we some screwed up bitches...hey by the way, what was the Doctor's name?"
Marcia
"Funny thing...I can't seem to remember that...but he does have a name?"
Heather
"Names are good...super hard to get noticed without one!"
Marcia
"He's got one, but I don't have any idea...got to think man!"
Heather
"Wonder if my Mom knows where I'm at?
(Scene Switch)
(2 Weeks Later)
Marcia waiting on corner for Heather to pick her up for school.
Car load of boys pass by honking horn, she suddenly gets a flashback as she see's the football player's faces.
Heather pulls up
"Sorry I'm late...had my car keys, but I couldn't remember where I parked my car?"
Marcia
"Funniest thing, but part of the football team came by honking their horn, and like...everything just sort of snapped in...I think I was attacked by the football team...it was them!"
Heather
"Just like that, the whole football team?"
Marcia
"No, not the whole...members of it...so like Doctor Bain took some scrapings and I guess we'll see what happens with the DNA thing...I mean, it's a start!"
Heather
"Ou, scrapings?"
Marcia
"Well, semen samples, guess they dry up on the inside, so if they can get a good sample...we'll see!"
Heather
"Good luck with all of that...you need to be real sure before you start doing any finger pointing...could ruin somebody's life with that stuff!"
Heather pulling into school parking lot.
Girls get out of car walk over to group before home room.
Ted walks up to Heather
"How you feeling girl, glad to see you back in the game!"
Heather
"Yea, it's been a process, but with each day..."
Ted
"I know...step by step!"
Jamie walks up to Heather
"When do you think you can return to the squad?"
"Heather getting sudden flashback, blurts out
"Your him!"
Jamie
"Who's him?"
Heather
"That voice...I remember that voice from the attack!"
Jamie laughing
"Don't look at me, I dunno what your talking about?"
Ted questions
"Are you sure Heather, cause that's a pretty serious allegation?"
Heather
"Hey Jamie...remember this one...this one's for Heather, say that for me?"
Jamie
"I'm not saying crap, mind your own business...why's she even thinking that?"
Ted
"Cause it is our business, why would she just think that...like out of the blue?"
Jamie
"All that headbanging got her all messed up, nobody did anything...just leave me alone..."
Jamie walking off
Home room bell rings
Heather
"Marcia, what are you thinking...you just see that?"
Marcia looking down
"Probably the same things you are...you got to watch what you say...I've already been hurt enough...try to be cool understand?"
Heather
"Yea, but...okay I get it...see you later!"
(Scene Switch)
Lakeland Hospital-Doctor Bain's Office
Tom Hatfield (DNA Supervisor) to Doctor Bain on phone
"Yes Richard we got the preliminaries on the Cody girl, ah Marcia Cody...she suffered major tearing of the vaginal wall and damage to the cervix...ah I found two different semen samples, we're ready for comparison...are you ready to approach the D.A. with a summary?"
Doctor Bain
"Yea, my findings are already in the submission, we just wait like usual and see who she calls in...all the usual...thanks Tom, bye!"
(Scene Switch)
Lakeland Police Department-Homicide Division
Detective Pam Martin
"Why do I always get this feeling that I'm babysitting this department...I wasn't even two steps in and your already having me manage the place...okay, let's see the report for Bob Patrick...are we getting anywhere?"
Detective Marks
"Kind of disturbing, but nothing you can't handle...with all the foot traffic they found over at the Patrick house...looked like a frat party...took the boys forever to separate everything!"
Martin
"Well, we started off with matching tire prints, nothing surprised me there!"
Marks
"This all looks so precalculated, but why was everything so sloppy?"
Martin
"Probably because it wasn't, like somebody surprised somebody...do you have to wait for someone to burp?"
Marks
"I'll figure this out...it's still too early...need another cup of coffee!"
(Scene Switch)
Int: Aunt Kate's Apartment
Heather finally get's back and Aunt Kate is trying to sort through things.
Heather
"Aunt Kate, why haven't the police done anything about this Jamie guy...I mean, he's the dude?"
Aunt Kate
"I don't have a clue, maybe they have some other things in the background, maybe you should give that detective girl a call, see what's up?"
Heather
"I can do that!"
Heather calling Detective Martin's private line.
Heather
"Hello, this is Heather Patrick, how are you Detective Martin?"
Martin
"Fine Miss Patrick, what can I help you with?"
Heather
"Well, I was kind of wondering about the case of the football players...like for any evidence, DNA, you know sperm samples and stuff...are you working on Marcia's situation, did you find anything?"
Martin
"Yes, of course...we have found things, but the report is not finalized and is not ready to be released...so we can't contend a case until everything has been brought forth!"
Heather
"So, this takes a lot of time, doesn't it?"
Martin
"Yes it does, but just be patient, we'll contact you when we're ready for additional testimony...okay Miss Patrick?"
Heather
"Okay, it's just that we were getting restless and we really wanted to know what was going on?"
Martin
"I understand Miss Patrick...anything else?"
Heather
"No, thank you...good bye!"
Hanging up phone.
Aunt Kate
"Any news?"
Heather
"Said they were still trying to put a case together...she said she'd contact me if they needed any more info...boy, this is taking longer than I thought!"
Aunt Kate
"Always does, just wanna be for sure before they start pointing fingers..."
(Scene Switch)
(Three Hours Later)
Int: Lakeland Police Department-Homicide Division
Agent Thomas (CSI Investigator) to Martin on phone
"Afternoon Miss Martin, this is Thomas!"
Detective Martin
"Afternoon, what have you got...I'm assuming this is about the Patrick case?"
Thomas
"Yes Mam, we concluded with four separate sets of tracks...coming into one window, looks like they were using it as a source of entrance, cause the only tracks we could find exiting were of a woman's size 9, looks like a style shoe...perhaps a Candies mule, but we're still checking...in any case the back sliding door was locked, but showed multiple traffic, so whoever came out the window went back to lock it up...hallway had blood splatter marks all over the place, which matched Mister Patrick's type, and we also located a broken open box of Rim Salt in the hallway, too!"
Martin
"Rim Salt...what is that?"
Thomas
"Just a finely ground salt use'd in bar tending...for making Margaritas and stuff!"
Martin
"Okay, well...what a mess we have here, anything else?"
Thomas
"Yea, there was a blood stained martini cart found over by the exiting fence, once again...consistent with Mister Patrick's blood type...kind of a mystery as to how he ended up behind the wheel of his car which of course was found crashed into his office that he no longer rented...it looks too much to have been planted...have to leave that up to you!"
Martin
"Yea, this is all looking so deliberate anyway...like each passing moment here...another shoe drops, you know?"
Thomas
"Oh yea, by the way...the source of entry...is was that girl's room they entered into...the Heather girl...had her pictures all over the wall, cheer leading gear...no mistake about that!
Martin
"There you go, just what I figured...thank you Mister Thomas...thank you very much!"
(Scene Close)
Closed down till after Christmas^^
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